Mark Helprin: A Soldier of the Great War
08/16/2024
I hardly know what to say about this novel. I can say that I did not know what to expect of it, but must immediately contradict that remark by saying that it was not what I expected. Whatever else those very vague expectations may have been, they did not include the combination of realist and visionary qualities that the book actually possesses.
In 1964, just outside of Rome, late in the afternoon of August 9th, a 74-year-old man and a 19-year-old boy find themselves thrown together by a need and desire to walk 70 kilometers (over 40 miles). The old man, Alessandro, is the title character, the soldier. Alessandro is a professor "of aesthetics." I'm not sure exactly what that means in practice--a sort of generalist of the arts, a critic without boundaries, and a theorizer, I suppose. The boy, Nicolo, works in a factory making airplane propellers and is vastly ignorant. He doesn't even know that the Great War, the First World War, happened, and is curious about it. The old man doesn't really want to talk about it, except in general historical terms.
Alessandro alternately encourages the boy, berates him for his ignorance and naivete, or provokes him with cryptic remarks. When Nicolo, piqued at Alessandro's refusal to answer a question about the war, points out that he wasn't "the only one ever to be in a war," Alessandro replies:
"I know, but I survived. That puts me on a lower plane."
"A lower plane?"
"Lower than those who perished. It was their war, not mine."
And he goes on to expand on that remark in a way which only confuses Nicolo.
I found Alessandro a bit annoying, a bit sententious, and for the first hundred pages or so thought I wasn't going to like the book very much: am I going to have 700-plus pages of this old man philosophizing and reminiscing? The conversation takes place amid vivid descriptions of the landscape and the changing light, but no amount of beauty in the setting would keep it from getting tiresome after a few hundred pages.
I'm a little ashamed to admit this, but the phrase "the joy of being alive" has always bothered me a bit. I'm not sure why this is so, because I am very familiar with the sensation and grateful for it. Perhaps the reason is only that it's something of a cliché, and so no longer really communicates what it says. Or--now that I think about it--maybe it's because I think of it as the voice of someone who has no reason not to be very happy with his circumstances, and if he did have such a reason would probably sing a different tune. At any rate I receive it somewhat cynically. And I thought this book was going to be all about The Joy of Being Alive and The Wisdom of Experience, and that I wasn't going to care much for it. And in fact those descriptors are justified, or at least justifiable, but, being clichés and rather vapid, they would do more harm than good as a commentary.
At a pause in their journey Alessandro's memory makes an excursion into his childhood, to a curious incident involving an Austrian princess at a ski lodge in the Alps. Then, as day breaks after the long night's trek:
The sun rose on the left and turned the glossy leaves of the poplars into a blinding haze of light too bright to behold until the wind coursed through the trees and they began to bend and sway, softening the glare.
Alessandro felt the world take fire. His heart repaired to the past and he barely touched the ground as he walked between trees that now were shimmering in the dawn. No matter that distant thunder is muted and slow, it comes through the air more clearly. After half a century and more, he was going to take one last look. He no longer cared what it might do to him. He just wanted to go back. And he did.
(I cannot help inserting here that I either don't understand or don't believe that remark about distant thunder, but never mind.)
That's the end of the first of ten fairly lengthy chapters. The next one, "Race to the Sea," won me over, and had me reading the rest of the book eagerly and with great enjoyment. Alessandro's initial return is to his youth, probably around 1908 or so. He is the son of a fairly affluent Roman family, well off but not aristocratic. He is an expert rider with a very fine horse. He learns mountaineering. He's in love with a neighbor girl, and one summer day encounters her as she is about to ride to the seashore. He wants to go with her, but he isn't ready, and she leaves without him. Starting out a half-hour later, he races to get there before her; that's the race of the chapter's title.
I have been on horseback maybe half a dozen times in my life, for no more than an hour each time, and never at any pace faster than a slow trot (or is canter the right term?). So although (or because?) I have absolutely no experience of wild horseback rides, I found the account of this one exhilarating. At that point I was fully drawn into the narrative, and continued so until it was over. The middle eight of the ten chapters tell the story of Alessandro's youth, his years in the war, and some of the aftermath. The last chapter returns to Alessandro and Nicolo, nearing the end of their long walk.
When I say "the story" I mean to include all the resonances of that term. This is a story in the grand mode, almost the epic mode, except that it is also very naturalistic. It's difficult to believe that the novel was written by someone in his mid-30s who had not (as far as I know*) experienced war, or indeed many of the physical situations described. Both Alessandro's horsemanship and his mountaineering skills prove to be important in his survival of the war.
Alessandro is a hero, and his heroism--which consists not only of courage, but also of skill and resourcefulness--sometimes strains credulity. But this does not come at the cost of any downplaying of the ugly madness of war, still less any glorification of it. The heroics, and certain other features, such as a number of highly improbable coincidences (one involving that childhood encounter with the Austrian princess), near-miraculous escapes, and moments of implausible good luck, make the book one which can fairly be categorized as a romance: a tale of great adventures with a more or less happy ending for the hero.
I said the story is naturalistic, and it is in its details. At the same time, the coincidences and the supreme good luck sometimes give the story a little of the flavor of magic realism. It could be called whimsy, but that suggests lightness. The whimsy is that of the pagan gods, "who kill us for their sport." (That's from Lear, I think.) There is at the center of many plot turns a mad dwarf who exercises an extraordinary influence on events. He is real, but his actions and his ravings suggest that there is something other than the natural at work. At times it seems that madness is the only plausible explanation of the war, in which some are carried through great danger by courage and luck, only to be undone by something outside their control, perhaps accident or mere coincidence, or, in one case, a soldier's misunderstanding of an order.
There is a semi-mystical sense of time, fate, and order operating in a meaningful pattern. There is a definite religiosity without any very specific content beyond an enormous sense of wonder and a confidence that beauty means something, and is not just an accident. Countering the madness and influence of the dwarf is a painting by Giorgione, La Tempesta, The Tempest (click here for what I hope is a pretty good reproduction). It is an enigmatic picture, and Alessandro is mildly obsessed with it, seeing some mysteriously ordering principle embodied in it. The principle is mysterious, and the order it produces is mysterious, very often seeming to be no order at all, perhaps more promised than realized. The story is not a tragedy, but it includes a great deal of sorrow.
I suggest that you read it. I don't think you'll be sorry.
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* The few biographical notes that I've read say that Helprin served in the Israeli Defense Forces, but do not mention any combat experience.
By the way, the author is not to be confused with Mark Halperin, the journalist.
Rob G wrote about this author in your series years ago, Mac. So I ended up with a copy of this book, and also In Sunlight and in Shadow. I began this one, and may have read close to 100 pages feeling the same way you initially felt about the old man, his voice as narrator sort of rubbing me the wrong way. Then I read all of In Sunlight and in Shadow, and while I enjoyed it I did think it went on a tad long. So perhaps one novel was all I could handle of Helprin, but I still have my copy of A Soldier of the Great War. I was thinking about it just the other day while culling my shelves giving books to a friend that runs a book sale over at South Alabama that helps finance a series bringing musicians to town. I kept it, but I was on the fence. I hate to not finish books...
I look forward to Rob's response to your post.
Posted by: Stu | 08/17/2024 at 09:17 AM
Was anticipating this back when you mentioned that you had read the book some weeks ago and were going to be writing about it, and I'm not disappointed. A Soldier... is my favorite modern novel and thus in my personal pantheon of favorite books all-time. It is the only book I've ever read when upon finishing it I immediately started it again and re-read the first 75 pages or so (I wasn't planning to re-read the whole thing; basically I just did not want to leave the novel's "world").
The borderline magic realism aspect is important; I have a friend who enjoyed the book but wasn't keen on what he called the "fantasy elements" that appeared here and there. I get that, but after thinking about it I began to wonder if that was really what was going on. It occurred to me that maybe what we were dealing with was a (somewhat) unreliable narrator of the Munchausen sort, though not as drastic, and one who was telling his story as with a knowing wink of the eye -- like a grandfather entertaining his grandkids with tall tales. Or maybe it's a combination of both which, given Helprin's creativity, wouldn't surprise me in the least.
It's interesting that the "race to the sea" is what finally grabbed you, as I have another friend who tried to read the book but put it down precisely because he found that episode interminable. When I went back to the book I saw that the actual "race" ran only about seven pages -- hardly endless. So other things seem to me to have played into his decision to give up on the thing. As for me, I was pretty much hooked from the get-go, from the moment on the bus when Alessandro tries to explain to Nicolo that the squid he's carrying in a bucket is actually a type of "water chicken."
Which leads me to one of the two things I'd add to your portrait: Helprin's humor. I find the book to be very funny in some spots, much in the same way that Dickens can be humorous even in his most serious works. Helprin's humor often lies in dialogue, and at times it approaches the Wodehouse/Monty Python level of farcical conversation. If someone wants to get a taste for this on a smaller scale I'd recommend (very highly!) the novella called "Perfection," which appears in his story collection The Pacific. It's about a teenage Hasidic kid in New York city, a Holocaust orphan, who receives an anointing from God to play baseball, of which he knows nothing. It is often hilarious but at the same time profoundly moving, as Helprin weaves the disparate elements of the story together perfectly. I have always thought that this story would make a great movie, provided the director could capture both the serious and comic elements and keep them in proper balance.
The other thing I'd add to your picture is the idea of Helprin's moral world. He is strikingly traditional in his moral commitments, and "old fashioned" virtues run constantly and consistently throughout his work. Things like honor, honesty, and loyalty are threaded through A Soldier..., and provide a moral hub around which the entire narrative revolves. It has long struck me that this is possibly the main reason that he's not better known among the literati. It's not that his fiction is moralistic in any didactic sense (it isn't -- he is seldom if ever preachy), but it portrays values and virtues that we as moderns have largely lost, and that makes a certain type of modern person uncomfortable. (Compare a writer like Stephen King, who, while being nowhere near the prose stylist that Helprin is, can tell a great story and also has a "moralistic" bent. Thing is, King's moral commitments are not nearly as counter-cultural as Helprin's are, so he is, in that regard at least, given something of a pass.)
This also makes me wonder why Helprin isn't better known among traditional readers and "conservatives" (understood broadly) who are looking for something other than the nihilism and angst present in a lot of modern fiction. There is a sense in which Helprin is a sort of Houllebecq in reverse -- a writer who calls out the same nonsense, but with a view towards strengthening the things that remain rather than collapsing into despair.
In any case, I very much agree with your take on the book, and your closing suggestion.
Posted by: Rob G | 08/17/2024 at 09:19 AM
There was a whole lot more I could have said, obviously, and what you say about the virtues is certainly an important part. You may be right about that being a factor in Helprin's lack of respect from the literati. I did (and do) have a vague sense that there is something in this book that's probably unwelcome to the fashionable intelligentsia and quasi-intelligentsia. Less vague is the defect that it has nothing to say about race, almost nothing to say about colonialism, and what it has to say about gender is "problematic."
Stu, it's interesting that your reaction to the first 100 pages is similar to mine. It would be worth a shot to venture into that second chapter and see if you like it any better.
Posted by: Mac | 08/17/2024 at 11:39 AM
Yes, my sense is that if anyone wrote as well as Helprin does but had a more "modern" sense of things he'd be a star.
Posted by: Rob G | 08/17/2024 at 05:25 PM
I read the first three chapters of Winter's Tale yesterday, Rob. Then I ended up watching a rather long recent (past few months) interview of Mark Helprin by Eric Metaxas on YouTube. I was thinking about your comment above while watching. I don't agree with either of them politically, but they are smart and fun to listen to. Helprin seems less reactionary than Metaxas is. He just comes across as an "old fashioned" guy to me, sort of a throwback to an earlier era. In his writing, and his views on things. A little grumpy and self-important, but there's nothing wrong with that. He certainly believes that he is being blackballed by the New York Times, Washington Post, NPR, and the Wall Street Journal (which I thought was a more conservative publication). Who knows? If you talk about it perhaps it happens. I saw Metaxas speak at a church in Fairhope, Alabama many years ago. It was on Dietrich Bonhoeffer, back when that book was published. He is a very entertaining speaker. Enjoying Winter's Tale so far!
Posted by: Stu | 08/19/2024 at 09:12 AM
I've only read Winter's Tale once, but enjoyed it very much. Either it or In Sunlight and In Shadow will be the one I read next, as I've read all the others except his latest twice. Winter's Tale is the one that put him on the map -- it was a huge bestseller back when it came out (early 80's iirc).
Posted by: Rob G | 08/19/2024 at 02:57 PM
"He certainly believes that he is being blackballed by the New York Times, Washington Post, NPR, and the Wall Street Journal (which I thought was a more conservative publication). "
That's interesting. That sounds a little stronger than what I would have thought the case to be, that he just hadn't caught on. That's more active and willful. I wonder how true it is.
WSJ is only relatively conservative. "Center-right" might be accurate--to the right of whatever the imaginary "center" might be, but not just out and out conservative.
One thing I didn't really mention in this post is Helprin's great narrative gift. Soldier is long but once it gets going it moves pretty vigorously, but it's still interesting prose, not just a functional narrative.
Posted by: Mac | 08/19/2024 at 04:42 PM
That's one of the "difficulties" with reading Helprin. The narrative vitality tempts one towards fast reading while the prose style encourages the opposite. I've learned to read him slowly, to resist the pull to speed along. In a sense you have to treat him as a Victorian, something we're not used to when reading post-Hemingway fiction.
Posted by: Rob G | 08/20/2024 at 06:03 AM
I guess there's been a tendency for literary and popular fiction to take different directions with respect to narrative, with the latter tending to take over the role of story-telling and the former getting more subtle. Only a tendency, though, as there are certainly exceptions. Cormac McCarthy's No Country For Old Men, for instance, works very well indeed as a thriller.
Posted by: Mac | 08/20/2024 at 11:36 PM
Agreed -- it's often exactly that sort of exception that I'm drawn to: well-written fiction that also works on the narrative level. I remember someone way back when describing Updike as a writer who could turn a lovely sentence and a lovely paragraph but who didn't know how to tell a good story. I gravitate to writers like Helprin who can do both.
Posted by: Rob G | 08/21/2024 at 05:43 AM